a rap I wrote

Started by tooslimtooshady, Apr 21, 2021, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    2slim - who am i?

    who am I the do or die
    when doves fly I choose to cry
    or s---t your eye with splooge and lie
    and say that im the newest guy
    to be your man and do your pie
    just kidding you stupid fly
    infinite militant guns
    buy me millions of drugs
    tell the kids take em up
    cause im just a shady f---
    2slim who him new kid
    to spit true s---
    trust me your girlfriend is ugly
    cut you like bundy
    and f--- your little stummy
     
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  2. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    like this if u want a part 2
     
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  3. Yeez
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    Yeez I forgot my status

    Apr 21, 2021
    needs a hopsin verse imo
     
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  4. Michael Myers
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    Apr 21, 2021
    Like the post damnit I want p2
     
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  5. Yeez
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    Apr 21, 2021
    Yes sir
     
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  6. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    i wish i could have hopsin work with me that would be a dream come true like to feature with him or just read him my lyrics
     
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    Apr 21, 2021
     
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  8. Yeez
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    Yeez I forgot my status

    Apr 21, 2021
    You're gonna f--- a pie?
     
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  9. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    [​IMG]
     
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  10. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    im glad u guys like my music im writing up part 2 right now!!!
     
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  11. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    part 2:

    2slim is a killer
    skin white like vanilla
    im not a ni---
    wait i cant say that
    where is doctor dre at
    i need a beat doctor
    i drank like 3 vodka
    and some green water
    i gotta pee doctor!
    f--- billie eilish in her eyelash
    taylor swift can s--- my right a----
    -cheek now you wanna speak (her album was called Speak Now)
    so speak now and get a beat down
    battering women is fun but its time to fry and eat out
    get it? eat out like when her period begins to leak out
    and blood is on my cheeks now
    i guess im looking like a freak now
    anyways i severed the heads of seven gays
    seven days in a row and then i levitate
    but i forgot to meditate
    my moms a c---- and life is never great
    i gotta smoke bong and weed to keep my head straight
    i just wanna be a rapper so i can get away
    from my stepdad he said i give head bad
    i dont want to give head dad!

    @Ricky @reservoirGod @yeez2 @Michael Myers @Captain Awesome AKA Papa
     
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  12. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    like this 4 part 3 my fans
     
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  13. Yeez
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    Nas level lyrics
     
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    BIGFOOT More than a myth

    Apr 21, 2021
    Your penmanship is extremely sharp, very skilled indeed. You could be the new Eminem.... But I’ve got to ask...



    Is this you Zolt?
     
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  15. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    thank you man it means a lot to me to have fans. and no im not zolt shady but he is 1 of my idols
     
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  16. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    thanks but i dont think im on nas level yet i think im right below him though like maybe jay z or lil wayne level but not quite nas or andre 3000 level. but i will get to nas level and then after that i will get to eminem webby joyner lucas hopsin kendrick lamar j cole level
     
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    Apr 21, 2021
    Better than Eminem.
     
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  18. Yeez
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    chris webby the GOAT? sorry man, you fire but no one will ever beat him
     
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  19. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    if u are being serious thank u but im not on his level he is the GOAT but one day maybe i will get there but if you are making fun of me then f--- u cause u would be just like the bullies that slim hates
     
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  20. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 21, 2021
    im glad u like webby too! but i dont know if i would call him the GOAT thats a bit extream i would say he is more like third or fourth best
     
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