Can I get some feedback on dis

Started by jackryan, Nov 13, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. jackryan
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    Nov 13, 2017

    Hey yall, I been making beats for a lil bit but I have never played them for anyone or gotten any feedback on any of them.
    Roast the h--- out of it, tell me what I could improve, or reply saying "f--- you jackryan I don't listen to your beats because you are black." Thanks.
     
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  2. RetiredAccount
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Nov 13, 2017
    I'm feeling this b, could I rap on this?
     
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  3. jackryan
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    Nov 13, 2017
    f--- yeah bro, as long as you give me a link to dat s---.
     
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    MACKAVON (MACKAVON)

    Nov 13, 2017
    it's really slow, the melody is cool, I feel like if you mixed it and made the melody sound like it's underwater (i dont know how to describe this effect so this is the best terminology I can muster) then it would even doper.
     
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    MACKAVON (MACKAVON)

    Nov 13, 2017
    Too slow of a beat for me though
     
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  6. RetiredAccount
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Nov 13, 2017
    will do
     
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  7. nunofherdeiro
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    Nov 13, 2017
    I like this. Very good bro keep doing this good s--- .
     
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  8. nunofherdeiro
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    Send me too !
     
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  9. bet
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    bet frank and thug saved my life.

    Nov 13, 2017
    Sounds great man! Vibe is nice.
     
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