CZ - "Why Do I Love Her?" (Feedback appreciated)

Started by cz1nonly, Dec 30, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. cz1nonly
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    Dec 30, 2017
    https://m.soundcloud.com/cz1nonly/cz-why-do-i-love-her-1

    I know the vocals are low at some parts, ima try to get them raised eventually


    [Hook]

    Why do I love her?
    Why do I care?
    Why when I see het
    Why do I stare?


    [Verse 1]

    Why do I love her? Why do I care?
    Why when I see her, why do I stare?
    She don't respect me, so why do I respect her?
    Probably cause of the fact that I can never get her
    I can't seem to get her, out of my - mind
    All my friends tell me that I'm out of my - mind
    Can't help how I feel only how I deal with it
    but I'm still with it, with no other ways to heal with it
    I'm overprotected, gotta lose that shell
    'bout to blow up but didn't light the fuse that well
    seems for every win, I lose like twelve
    and this one girl got me confused as h---
    I met cupid & I swallowed the dart
    don't mind not being a leader when I follow my heart
    the road to glory can be hollow and dark
    I wanna tell her... but I don't know how to start
    so I'm saying...

    [Hook] (background in hook)

    Why do I love her? (every girl I loved, never seemed to love me back)
    Why do I care? (every girl I loved, never seemed to love me back)
    Why when I see her (every girl I loved, never seemed to love me back)
    Why do I stare? (every girl I love, why don't they love me back?)


    [verse 2]

    My dreams are always broken, I'm screaming & I'm choking
    believe what I achieve will be easily just stolen
    so every passion I have I'm leaving it just hoping
    that I don't fail at it, keeping it in focus
    back in school everything seemed so practical
    doing what I have to do, usually I'd act a fool
    This one chick I liked she lived a different life
    It was like she wasn't into the glitz and ice
    I liked her, and I felt she liked me
    It felt so nicely like who the h--- would like me
    She was my only reason for going to class
    If she ain't show to a class than I ain't go like an a---
    So each day i'd say aight, I'ma make a move
    but kept freezing up, man I wasn't able too
    Graduation came, never told her how I felt
    so now I'm left not knowing heart frozen on the shelf like...


    [Hook] (background in hook)

    Why do I love her? (every girl I loved, never seemed to love me back)
    Why do I care? (every girl I loved, never seemed to love me back)
    Why when I see her (every girl I loved, never seemed to love me back)
    Why do I stare? (every girl I love, why don't they love me back?)


    [Outro]
    I think cupid hit me with that dart again... again (2x)

    So I'm screaming..

    Not again! not again! not again!
    Not again! not again! not again!
    Not again! not again! not again!
    Not again! not again! not a...gain..
     
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  2. Reed Richards
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    Dec 31, 2017
    I f--- with it bro
    Deserves a listen from anyone that stumbles onto this thread imo
     
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    Dec 31, 2017
    i dig it
     
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