I remixed God's Plan & Diplomatic Immunity

Started by sunrey, Feb 22, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. sunrey
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    I'm a 19 year old rapper, lemme know what you think. Listen til the 2nd half cause I like Diplomatic Immunity better.

     
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  2. Gurj
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    “When I kick a rap it’s not gluten-free” :what22:
     
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    Because when someone rapes a girl, she has gluten on her booty!
     
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  4. Gurj
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    Most of your lyrics don’t make any sense. It sounds like you’re just trying to make them fit the rhyme scheme. The flow and delivery are okay though
     
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  5. sunrey
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    I'm cool with people not liking my music but I'm not cool with people making false & ignorant comments. Literally the line right before that is "All about the bread" lmao. Which line doesn't make sense? Each one of them has meaning. I can explain all of em to you if you want
     
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  6. Gurj
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    Being all about the bread doesn’t make you kick a rap that’s gluten free
     
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    The idea of kicking a rap that’s gluten free doesn’t make any sense. If anything you’re saying that your rap doesn’t have substance
     
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    Post the lyrics and I’ll tell you which ones don’t make sense
     
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    Mraczewsky r.i.p. mac

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    Gurj isn't an mf DOOM stan for no reason
     
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    *MF DOOM
     
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    lmao Gurj really kilt dis kids dreams
     
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  13. sunrey
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    Lmao I said when I kick a rap its NOT gluten free. Because I'm all about the bread. How does that not make sense?

    Here's the lyrics:

    move between sing and rap on some diplomatic immunity
    hit the sack around 2 or 3, i been up writing, i hit my class with a truancy
    waiting for my cash you best hit me back with gratuity
    chase lets get it handled, then split the bag, between you and me

    all about the bread when i kick a rap it’s not gluten free
    you should know its way more than tit for tat if you s---t at me
    all you sheeple acting like s--- aint trash, you aint fooling me
    sycophants, you aint new to me, kissing a--- to these dudes that need to hit the gas,

    when it comes down to spitting, thats when they lose to me
    sun is gon son em and send em back to puberty
    i know god’s plan he’s just sitting back approvingly
    just ask he send it fast cause i’m getting anxious truthfully

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    Try me.
     
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  14. sunrey
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    lol nope, he got my lyric wrong.
     
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    When you respond to people hating, you already gave them the power
     
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    you right. i dont think hes hating tho, im just tryna have a discussion with him and see what lyrics he thinks dont make sense cause lyrics is something i put a h--- of a lot of time into. i want people to see that. also he's criticizing a lyric that he quoted wrong so im tryna clear that up.
     
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    You cant really control other people, so its pointless
     
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    If you say it’s not gluten-free then you’re putting bad substance in your rap since it’s been proven that gluten can be bad for you. Either way, it doesn’t work. You should really just avoid using that
     
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    Lmaoooo I was waiting for you to try to rip my s--- apart and you came with that? you gotta be trolling right? :drakelaugh2:

    im all about the bread > bread has gluten in it > hence my raps arent gluten free

    it aint that deep dawg
     
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  20. sunrey
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    and so none of of the other lines "didn't make sense" then? :westbrook:
     
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