Sep 1, 2017 so I've been writing s--- for a long time but just recently started recording s---... recorded this at my house with cheap equipment and edited myself so quality is far from great... I think I'm pretty decent at rhyming/wordplay tho but curious if y'all could listen and give any feedback (besides the obvious sound issues)... would be much appreciated
Sep 1, 2017 you prob need to work on delivery and breath control a little, but otherwise lyrically it's interesting. keep going you're on the right track imo.
Sep 1, 2017 Was expecting way worse, so good job (Listened to it twice to the review lol). delivery in parts is aight but need improving, especially your breath control + when you start trying to rap fast or throwing in multi's you sound like that cringe Watsky f-- lol, it's as if you are trying to finish your bar as quick as possible before you run out of breath. Makes it sound a little too like nerdy. Probs take breaths as your rapping like pauses in syllables if it is an issue, sort of like you did from 30-39 seconds in. But good job man, barely listen to peoples stuff now days on forums but this is really good for a first attempt. Keep it up. Will check your other stuff when you post it in the future. Thought off-it delivery was better (especially second half of it) but the quality and mixing sucks lol
Sep 1, 2017 before I got complaints from ppl that the vocals were too low, so I turned them way up this time lol. Hard for me to judge with my s-----y mixing skills. Thanks for listening tho
Sep 1, 2017 wow thank you so much for the detailed feedback, I really appreciate it! I just try to mix up the speed/flow when I can, but I guess it doesn't come off as well as I hope sometimes. I get what you're saying bc it's sorta like what Em does nowadays a lot. Also thanks for the encouragement, I'll be sure to tag you when I post something next. Trying to get in my friends studio to record an EP soon.
Sep 1, 2017 because they all sound the same. I live in a middle class suburban area, and these other white dudes that I know only rap about selling drugs, doing them, etc. It's just very corny to me. I could tolerate it if at least they could spit, but it's all single syllable rhymes, lazy af flows etc
Sep 22, 2017 Hey guys, just posted another song, would appreciate some more feedback and s--- from my sxn80 fam... used LANDR to master so hopefully audio sounds a bit better @Rick James @CSW @hustleandcuss @stzenit94
Sep 22, 2017 This Jarren Benton voice again. Keep going, you're doing good as a beginner. If you need beats, hit me up.
Sep 22, 2017 Lol i listened to a couple interviews with that dude, he's one of the realest dudes in rap so I'll take it And u make beats?? Pm me please
Sep 28, 2017 haha thanks... that's because I finally figured out how to layer vocals properly and I used LANDR to master it
