Production My first attempt at a sample. The Doors(demo)

Started by ZigZags, Nov 8, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. ZigZags
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    Nov 8, 2015


    This is the first time i've ever tried to sample another song in my production. Its a work in progress right now, but i'm just trying to see how this sounds from an outsiders prospective.. All feedback is appreciated. @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Nov 8, 2015
    i like what you're doing with it, but I feel like the really rapid hitting drum parts don't fit, it needs a more mellow, downtempo beat to match it
     
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  3. ZigZags
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    Thank you so much for the feedback, I've been kinda second guessing the drum patterns to be completely honest. I just wanted to publish atleast a snippet so badly to see what people thought of it, so i'll definitely keep that in mind.
     
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    Cyreides gfy

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    honestly the drum patterns aren't even that bad, just the rapid hits here and there don't fit. overall i like the drums and what you've done with it so just fix that and you'll be golden. can't comment on the mix or anything else though since I just listened real quick at low volume on my s-----y speakers haha
     
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    Translucent Loose Cannon

    Nov 8, 2015
    Pretty much what @Cyreides said. The sequencing isn't bad at all for your first time. I don't know if you did any mixing on this but definitely EQ your drums, then it will fit more snug in your mix.
     
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  6. K18 El Duderino
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    K18 El Duderino Welcome to the Dopamine Dome

    Nov 8, 2015
    Good choice for the sample. I would say get a better drum kit and different sounds. They sound generic in a sense. But good melody and good job with it being your first! Keep producing brotha
     
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    Ordinary Joel Found a new way to flow

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    Good first attempt. I agree with everyones opinion in that a slower drum kit would've made a world of difference.

    Loved the sample though.
     
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    Thank you guys so f---ing much for the feedback, it means alot to me that people take the time to even listen to my s---. I will be taking all things into consideration, especially using a different drum kit. And about the mixing, it's definitely unmixed right now.
     
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    Atleast this is a very fun sample to work with!, If you guys have any old r&b or soulful music that would be good for samples please let me know also, Im trying to get as acclimated to sampling as i possibly can.
     
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    Love the choice of sample, but I also just really love the doors

    Much better than my first attempt lol
     
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    Sterling Psychic Spy In Training

    Nov 13, 2015
    Nice clean cuts on the sample, sounds cool. The drums do sound a bit generic but that's easily fixed. Someone mentioned above about the rapid snare sounding a bit off and I agree with that. When I do snare rolls I like to put a couple of the hits a semitone up on the piano roll, it adds movement and creates an almost flutter effect as opposed to a robotic knock. Just a thought though.

    This is much better than my first attempt. Over the rainbow I think it was... It was terrible! Keep at it man
     
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