NEW SONG - PlayWryte - Dumb

Started by ItsPwizz, May 13, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    May 13, 2018


    Here is my new song!

    Lyrics:

    Hook x2
    Everybody sound the same
    Who the f--- the counterweight
    Ya’ll on this lil wave
    I’m about to dig a grave
    All of yall lil dumb
    Show me who the real ones
    Everybody out the way
    Out the way

    Bridge x2
    Mumbling this nonsense
    Everybody’s on this
    Music with no content
    Debating who the hottest

    Verse 1
    Now a days, ya’ll sound the same
    Its a crowded place, move out the way
    I’ve been alienated, been outta space
    Pulling d-ck moves, so how's it taste
    Ya’ll autotune it, then call it music
    No heart into it, its just all illusions
    And the part that’s stupid, its excecuted
    The next to do it, wont be hard to influence
    Ya’ll scripted, with the same plot
    To brainwash, what you claims hot
    I’ma change the topic, and drain the swamp
    Arrange the bodies, in the same plot
    Ya’ll drug addicted, or is it just business
    To get the club lit, or the young to witness
    Not a tough decision, when theres money in it
    Instead of speaking up, you just mumble this s---
    There’s more behind it, cant ignore the silence
    A formed alliance, ya’ll support blinded
    Can’t afford to buy it, I’m morally binded
    It’s in my DNA, and your’s is diamonds
    Were made weak, to be enslaved sheep
    Were taught freedom, but can’t speak
    So mumble rap, is a way to teach
    Just to keep us seated, and remain asleep

    Bridge 2
    But I cant do this,
    No no no no no
    I cant do this
    I just can't f---ing stand this music
    No no no no no
    I cant do this
    No no no no no

    Hook x2
    Everybody sound the same
    Who the f--- the counterweight
    Ya’ll on this lil wave
    I’m about to dig a grave
    All of yall lil dumb
    Show me who the real ones
    Everybody out the way
    Out the way

    Bridge x2
    Mumbling this nonsense
    Everybody’s on this
    Music with no content
    Debating who the hottest

    Verse 2
    If I made a list, who the greatest is
    In this current state, I’d be saying this
    It’d be Cole and Kendrick, and Joyner Lucas
    Then maybe Logic, ya boy included
    That’s being modest, I’m C Wallace
    My egos big, let me meet the hottest
    I’m cleaning house, I’ma keep it spotless
    Asleep on the couch, with my feet up on it
    You dont want me WOKE, I’m a sleeping giant
    This is my jungle, don’t feed the lion
    They say mumble rap, is where the moneys at
    But tell Pump to pack, cant keep quiet
    Its been long enough, I swear to god I’m up
    My ears been ringing, so I call the bluff
    But its not you, as I walk the booth
    I’m like a teenage boy again, ya heart is crushed
    So speak to me, just between the knees
    Its time to blow, but please no teeth
    Cause you known biters, with ghost writers
    I keep it tucked, like I keep the peace/piece
    But I’m like ya’ll , I don’t do either
    I refuse to hide it, to clueless minors
    Just let it hang, as you stretch ya chains
    Did my message change, or are you wiser?

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  2. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 About to Snap

    May 14, 2018
    Was really feeling this till “then maybe Logic” and It killed the whole thing for me.
     
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  3. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    May 14, 2018
    Haha thanks, that’s why I followed it was the next couple of bars saying I’m being modest etc
     
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  4. Grim
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    Grim Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    May 17, 2018
    f---ing white people
     
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    Grim Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    May 17, 2018
    also Joyner Lucas and Logic are straight garbage
     
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  6. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    May 17, 2018
    Thanks for the feedback!
     
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  7. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 About to Snap

    May 25, 2018
    Maaaaan, Logic I agree, but I kinda f--- with Joyner
     
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  8. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    May 31, 2018
    Would appreciate more feedback, thanks!
     
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  9. Donkey Kong Country
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    Donkey Kong Country they can't understand me, i'm talkin hieroglyphics

    May 31, 2018
    Since you've bumped this and deleted your post like five times...

    Saying s--- like "Ya’ll autotune it, then call it music" and talking about how bad "mumble rap" is and then praising artists like j cole and logic and joyner lucas combined with the name "playwryte"...if I'm being completely honest, it almost makes this sound like satire. Like it's just such a surface level, out-of-touch take on modern rap. Rap doesn't have to sound a certain way; there's room for rappers like westside gunn and rappers like playboi carti in 2018. You're putting rap in a box and complaining about lack of creativity while also requesting rappers to stifle their creativity and rap the way you think they should rap.
     
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  10. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    May 31, 2018
    I appreciate your time to listen and give feedback. I also get where youre coming from although you missed the point of this song completely and the lyrics and meaning. Which is why I posted the lyrics as well. Youre saying the exact opposite of what youre listening to in this song. I'm saying how everyone these days is riding a certain wave and all sounding the same from a mainstream route. Saying people should be more creative and be original. Also I talk about how mumble rap/modern hiphop is feeding into the negative stereotypes of the culture paved by white corporate america. Used as a brainwashing tool. Lastly if you listen to/read the bars following after my "greatest list of current music" I'm contradicting the statement, and squashing the cliche list. But thanks for you time, I sincerely apprieciate your time! Much Love!
     
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  11. Grim
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    Grim Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    May 31, 2018
    Did you really tell the smartest guy on this site, who also runs a writing website that he doesn’t understand what you meant in your music? He’s saying that going against the grain in the fashion you are is cliche and not really going against the grain.
     
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Jun 1, 2018
    I’m so sorry that my response to someone other than yourself took away energy from you to take what I said personal. Especially since what I said in response wasn’t disrespectful but a clarification of the words I wrote. Much love to you as well! Happy Friday!
     
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  13. Grim
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    Grim Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Jun 1, 2018
    Being a self righteous prick isn’t going to get people to enjoy your s-----y music bro. You have potential with your flow and rapping but your lyrics and content are trash and song structure is kinda boring.
     
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Jun 1, 2018
    Thanks bro!
     
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