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Started by FiveOh1, Apr 29, 2021, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Apr 29, 2021
    Today I am posting two news songs because I uploaded one to YouTube and the other came out on Spotify after being delayed by distributors for some reason.
    Track one is called There and is just a random song I decided to do.


    the second one is called PUNCHES and is off my album CRASH.



    @CreativeSXN
    As always thanks for listening. And you guys rock.
     
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  2. 1999
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    1999

    Apr 29, 2021
    first beat is cool, but its clear you still haven't understood why your flow doesnt work
     
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  3. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Apr 29, 2021
    I also did this but it’s just a cover
     
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  4. Michael Myers
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    Michael Myers Moderator

    Apr 29, 2021
    Your flow on that song above this post (esp first verse) is dope!

    I like the first 2 sonically but yeah like Tyler said for some reason flow is a little off beat.
     
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  5. Antman
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    Antman No Cap

    Apr 29, 2021
    Hes completely off tempo.

    The cover is the most on beat thing you’ve posted. You have to find a rhythm, matching certain claps of the beat. There a technical term for it. It’s like how you would bop your head to the beat, same thing. A groove
     
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  6. tooslimtooshady
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    tooslimtooshady EMINEM = GOAT

    Apr 29, 2021
    dont listen to these haters ur music is dope bro these haters probably listen 2 mumble crap
     
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  7. LasiK
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    LasiK d-mn fine coffee

    Apr 29, 2021
    can’t rap
     
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  8. BIGFOOT
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    BIGFOOT More than a myth!

    May 8, 2021
    One of the best rappers on this site. I challenge @1999 to post some of your own work so we can give constructive criticism
     
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  9. 1999
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    1999

    May 8, 2021
    What makes you think that
     
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  10. DKC
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    DKC hank trill

    May 8, 2021
    You're being meaner by lying to him than people are who are giving him constructive criticism. This sxn is never gonna be good if people just tell their friends all their music is good.
     
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  11. 1999
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    1999

    May 8, 2021
    "Your flows off"
    "THEN YOU RAP :JOEBUDDEN:"

    Idgi
     
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    BIGFOOT More than a myth!

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    Meanie


    I still stand by what I said. @1999 let’s hear how u rap my man.
     
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  13. Winter
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    Winter Super Comfy

    May 8, 2021
    I understand wanting to gas your friends, but it’s really not helping anyone to act like he has nothing to work on
     
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    1999

    May 8, 2021
    You do not have to make music to criticize music (lightly at that)

    But ok I will be sure to @ you
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    May 8, 2021
    What the heck happened in here? Sheesh I leave you guys alone for 5 minutes and we fighting.
     
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  16. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    May 8, 2021
    ALSO, CRASH is out May 14th y’all can pre-order on iTunes and pre save on Spotify.
    Meanwhile, here’s this
     
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  17. Ricky
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    May 8, 2021
    "Mason media is keeping us brainless, feeding us cheap entertainment" - quote of the year.

    Dope track. one of your best so far, s--- sounds like 2010 B.o.B. for some reason
     
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  18. 1999
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    1999

    May 8, 2021
    Flow's improved, also your writing isn't bad and the hook is actually really good but have you ever tried to rap over less cinematic beats? Might be easier to understand the flow criticism.
     
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    1999

    May 8, 2021
    Donald trumps a fa---- is also up there
     
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    Ricky Hip-Hop CEO ™

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    Wasn't a fan of that line tbh, but what do I know, right? I'm just some polish dude so I'm not judging anybody
     
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