What makes a rhyme scheme flawless to you?

Started by Super Mario25, Apr 23, 2017, in Music Add to Reading List

  1. Super Mario25
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    Super Mario25 King of cool

    Apr 23, 2017
    to me not rhyming the same word or obvious cliche rhymes

    being creative with your rhymes

    rhyming more then one syllable and having complex rhyme schemes in

    multi-syllabic rhyme format
     
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  2. canyouduck
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    canyouduck 50-0

    Apr 23, 2017
    Rhymescheme pedo has returned

    [11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
    [11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
    [11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
    [11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
    I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
    [11:36] cllmemayb14: :)
    [11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
    [11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
    [11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
    [11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
    [11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
    [11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
    [11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
    [11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
    [11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
    [11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
    [11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
    [11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
    [11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we’re close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? :emoji_wink:
    [11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
    [11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
    [11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
    [11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
    [11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol :emoji_wink:
    [11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
    [11:49] juelzenclade20: i’ll b ther
    [11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I’ll be sitting outside the theatre. I’ll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts :emoji_wink:
    [11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
    [11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
    [11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
    [11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! :emoji_wink:
    [11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
    [11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
    [11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
    [11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
    [11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
    [11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
    [11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
    [11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
    [11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
    [11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
    [11:52] cllmemayb14: r-----ed pervert
    [11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl
     
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  3. Lucy
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    Lucy #1

    Apr 23, 2017
    lmao was this @Papa Buff pretending to b grill?
     
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  4. canyouduck
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    canyouduck 50-0

    Apr 23, 2017
    No it was someone else lol
     
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  5. Lucy
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    Lucy #1

    Apr 23, 2017
    the smilies give it the buffalo charm
     
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  6. Big Dangerous
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    Big Dangerous World Heavyweight Champion

    Apr 23, 2017
    Look it's the Rhyme King

    Back at it again with the rhyme schemes
     
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  7. Enigma
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    Enigma Civil liberties > Police safety

    Apr 23, 2017
    Delivery > rhyme scheme

    You can have the most complex rhyme scheme or simple rhyme scheme, if your delivery isn't good, it's not going to sound good. This is why when I hear "underground rappers" spit twenty thousand bars in under a minute, it does very little for me. Anyone can spit multis, that doesn't necessarily lead to a good song/music.
     
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  8. Stevio
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    Stevio Goonio Da Boonio

    Apr 23, 2017
    Well thought out bars, that fit with the theme/message of the song, not random ones for the sake of it thrown in, simple rhymes, complex rhymes I'm good with either as long as the beat is good and the rapper is musically gifted enough to ride the beat or match the mood of it
     
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  9. Buu
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    Buu

    Apr 23, 2017
    His flow really drives him
     
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  10. dkdnfbdjdkdddjdjfvcgfl
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    Apr 23, 2017
    agreed

    like it's impressive, but outside of how good it looks in a "worlds fastest most complex rapper" video or a page of the guiness book, it's s--- if its solely what the rapper is relying on. shouldn't have to do davinci code puzzle mental gymnastics to find out what someone is saying.

    the best rap sounds good.
     
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  11. Enigma
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    Enigma Civil liberties > Police safety

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    Exactly. If multis are the center/forefront of your music, you're probably not making very good music. It's okay to incorporate these elements in your music as long as you're not focusing on just that *cough* Eminem *cough*
     
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  12. Super Mario25
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    Super Mario25 King of cool

    Apr 23, 2017
    i could care about rhymes and complex lyrics but i also care about music as well as long as there is balance.
     
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  13. LordArmNHammer
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    Apr 23, 2017
    Delivery and flow, that's why big is one of my favourites along with big pun their flow was just crazy the way they rhymed words internally and how they began the next ryhme scheme before ending the first was amazing and they made it seem effortless which made it even better
     
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  14. SliK
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    SliK mad kunt

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    Before 2005 Eminem was the best at making multi syllable rhymes seem secondary to the message in his music. Don't get me wrong I hate the music he makes now, but songs like Stan and Renegade and really anything from that 5 year period can be used as an example of exactly how to use multi syllable rhymes
     
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  15. joeyp363
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    I would say Eminem on Speedom
     
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  16. Fitzy
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    Apr 24, 2017
    this, but i feel like someone like Fabolous sounds awesome doing it. Sounds smooth and effortless, especially back in the early 2000's
     
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  17. theg
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    theg got that pma

    Apr 24, 2017
    isnt this that weirdo that constantly makes threads on sites about rhyme schemes until they run him off
    im pretty sure someone from thecoli exposed him last time he posted here
     
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  18. OGASAPTRAPLORD
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    OGASAPTRAPLORD PLEASE DON'T TOUCH MY RAF

    Apr 24, 2017
    Enunciation especially and flow/delivery. Em from 1999-2005 is the best i've ever heard do this.
     
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  19. 1999
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    Apr 24, 2017
    What do you think a 'clich rhyme' is
     
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  20. 1999
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    Apr 24, 2017
    Not to mention most underground rappers subject matter consists of 'im better than you' and 'im white so im way better than you'

    Sorry for double post
     
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