“I’m the next killer”, no sound just lyrics

Started by attila, Dec 27, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. attila
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    Dec 27, 2018
    I listen to a lot of strange music.

    Let me know if It’s good enough to b in a song or trash

    I like sharp knives
    Might follow your girl into the woods into the darkest hour of the night
    If she struggles & tries to fight me
    It’s gonna make me more happy
    Cause I love it when I see a b---- skirmish
    Cause it’s not like she doesn’t deserve it
    I warned her a couple times
    I’m not one who you should mess with
    Especially when your left unprotected
    I can detect the fear in your eyes
    Like an animal sensing when a person dies
    She tries to get away so
    I dragged her to the shed
    Decapitated her head
    Now she is bleeding on the floor dead
    Then I took the head back the house
    Along with her panties and blouse
    Was all because she rejected me when she couldn’t go past the tip when my d-ck was in her mouth
    So throughout the night I continue ducking and strangling these b------s
    Sowing & stitching and leaving there heads dangling in the shed
    Stuck up on the walls like some psycho version of the Sistine Chapel!
    I’m doing this s--- so well
    I might brand it like Apple


    Times 2

    So yeah call me a psycho
    Call me a killer
    I’m the next Geoffrey dahmer


    So I continue my onslaught
    I never thought I’d turn out this insane
    But mother f---ers making me go through so much pain
    Like the first b----
    That I followed into the woods
    The b---- thought she could’ve gotten away with it
    Just a lesson from my listeners out there
    I dare somebody to f--- with me
    I’ll trick you into thinking we’re buddies
    Then next minute thing is getting bloody
    Cause seeing the sight of blood excites me
    I study this s--- closely
    Documentaries about serial killers
    Don’t know why
    I did it out of boredom
    So back to my shed where I store them
    Looks like one of the bodies is gone
    That’s fine with me
    I don’t care
    I drank every ounce of blood they had
    & ate their bloody intestines
    So there’s nothing more that I can gain from them
    It’s crazy how a human can be this demented
    I feel like an evil villain
    This s--- is chillen
    Like ice in a freezer
    So don’t get mad get glad it isn’t you
    Being chopped into two
    Because if it was just imagine what I’ll do to you



    So yeah call me a psycho
    Call me a killer
    I’m the next Geoffrey dahmer
     
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  2. JEB
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    JEB

    Dec 27, 2018
    Share this with everyone you love and respect
     
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  3. attila
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    Dec 27, 2018
    Why lol?
     
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  4. The Moon Man
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    The Moon Man Out of my mind

    Dec 27, 2018
    I don't know, some of it rhymes, some of it doesn't, seems a little basic but rap it, let's hear your vision.
     
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  5. Tyler F u c k i n g Waves
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    Tyler F u c k i n g Waves Discord Refugee

    Dec 27, 2018
    Bruh get help
     
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  6. Lil Squeed
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    Lil Squeed French Montana Stan

    Dec 27, 2018
    nope
     
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  7. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Dec 27, 2018
    Yeah this. But yeah if you like it record it and let’s hear what it sounds like.
     
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  8. mow
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    mow long live flippa

    Dec 27, 2018
    this is some incel s---
     
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  9. Brubbels
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    Dec 27, 2018
    Please find a different hobby
     
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  10. TheRealStan
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    Dec 27, 2018
    Oh you want to battle?

    Aquaman? You're so stupid you couldnt get high in amsterdam
    Im only joking im a massive fan, i'd probably overdose on half a gram
     
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  11. Reed Richards
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    Dec 27, 2018
    One day ima drop something and youre all gonna go find a hobby after i do.
     
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  12. The Moon Man
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    The Moon Man Out of my mind

    Dec 27, 2018
    It's just little things, the first line is too simple and you could easily make it more complex. For example - I like sharp knives > my mind is drawn to sharp knives, this gives you a near rhyme straight off the bat and then your second line seems too long but if you shortened it to you'll find me in the woods on a dark night - the rhyming just gets better and it flows better in my head. If you want to write a serial killer song, shock value isn't enough.
     
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  13. Kevin
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    Kevin Migo

    Dec 28, 2018
    [​IMG]
     
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  14. Kevin
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    Kevin Migo

    Dec 28, 2018
    Haha go f--- yourself for trying to help a r----- without getting paid by the county.
     
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  15. Kevin
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    Kevin Migo

    Dec 28, 2018
    Brobot i give it none out of four fingers on one hand. A zero Steve, 0.
     
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  16. theg
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    theg got that pma

    Dec 31, 2018
    this is f---in sick you should record this
     
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  17. theg
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    theg got that pma

    Dec 31, 2018
    heads up though it's jeffery not geoffery
     
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  18. Jay Zeus
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    Jay Zeus I am the god-favored weed strain

    Dec 31, 2018
    You first. Lol. This is the exact type of s--- from Em you used to eat his a--- for.
     
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