So Cold - 6 Trè

Started by FiveOh1, Aug 17, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Aug 17, 2018
    Here’s some depressing s----s I did. Going to rework it and change my voice and flow. But here’s the rough draft.
    @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. sheldon
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    Aug 21, 2018
    There’s so much wrong with this, i dont know where to begin

    The beat sounds like a Recovery B Side, ur voice/delivery is terrible, flow is god awful like not even on the beat, lyrics are badly put together and written too. Its just overall a total mess. Also “type song”? Really? Isnt the point of being an artist being fresh and original and not making poverty versions of another person’s style? What is your sound? Your artistic persona? Your image? Can you answer any of these questions?

    Imo nothing here even shows a sliver of artistic potential. This is an emotional song and i felt no emotion nor have i come any closer to knowing you more as a person.

    Im just giving you my raw thoughts, dont take it too hard. This will make you better in the long run.
     
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  3. Genius Is Hot Trash
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    Aug 21, 2018
    stfu
     
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  4. sheldon
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    Aug 21, 2018
    :kreepykanye:
     
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  5. Genius Is Hot Trash
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    Aug 21, 2018
    actually wtf is that piece of crap in the op lmfao
     
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  6. Freshandclean
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    Freshandclean I'm fresher than you all, so I don't have to pause

    Aug 21, 2018
    This ain’t it bruh
     
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  7. Bourbon Ben
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    Aug 21, 2018
    good job s----s tight
     
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  8. Freshandclean
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    Freshandclean I'm fresher than you all, so I don't have to pause

    Aug 21, 2018
    n----- stop lying
     
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  9. Bourbon Ben
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    Bourbon Ben Mad pooper

    Aug 21, 2018
    song got me

    :mjdance:
     
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  10. Genius Is Hot Trash
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    Aug 21, 2018
    atleast this is better than Loveless
     
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  11. Freshandclean
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    Freshandclean I'm fresher than you all, so I don't have to pause

    Aug 21, 2018
    Name one lyric :hoplease:
     
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  12. Bourbon Ben
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    Bourbon Ben Mad pooper

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  13. Bourbon Ben
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    Bourbon Ben Mad pooper

    Aug 21, 2018
    so cold my balls froze
     
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    Freshandclean I'm fresher than you all, so I don't have to pause

    Aug 21, 2018
    :lmaooo:
     
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  15. Jakepaulerforlifelogang
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    Aug 22, 2018
    Made me cry this is so beautiful. Sounds like mmlp2
     
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    :bookah:
     
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    This night is the hardest I laughed in a long time :bookah::bookah::bookah:
     
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    Im sorry 6Tre but :bookah:
     
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  19. SleepyGhost
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    Yo, sorry for the spam but this s--- still hilarious :bookah:
     
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    :dead3:
     
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