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Started by sheldon, Mar 29, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. sheldon
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  2. Tyler
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    Tyler Those aren't mountains

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    This is AOTY, calling it now.
     
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  3. Genius Is Hot Trash
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    Genius Is Hot Trash Juicy J proly fucked your mom

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    Varun out here saving 2018
     
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    Tyler Those aren't mountains

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    This is what QUESTION MARK was tryna be
     
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  5. Genius Is Hot Trash
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    Genius Is Hot Trash Juicy J proly fucked your mom

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    when ur homie better at making rap music than Eminem in 2018
     
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  6. sheldon
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    :currydead:
     
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  7. Tyler
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    Tyler Those aren't mountains

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    @EminemSXN
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  8. sheldon
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    u really busted out the Em Sxn tag lmao
     
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  9. Tyler
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    Tyler Those aren't mountains

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    why's half the people tagged in the OP not even existent, how old is that tag wall
     
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  10. sheldon
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    idk like a month old
     
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    ppl change they names too much
     
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  12. Tyler
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    Tyler Those aren't mountains

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    Ion know who you could be tlkin bout
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    Koolo SAS IS THE NEW KANYE

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    3 days ban for this acct and your alt
     
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  14. Tyler
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    Tyler Those aren't mountains

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    what alt
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    [​IMG]

    op won
     
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    in for Tyler Waves Koolo beef in 2018
     
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    :currydead::currydead::currydead:
     
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    Grim Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

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    In for classic
     
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    Thoughts?
     
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  20. Grim
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    Grim Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

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    Sorry I was sleeping. Here are my honest thoughts:

    On God/Miss was definitely the best work you’ve put out so far. Very versatile and compelling. Espescially that second half, but throughout that first half too. Really don’t have any gripes with it at all. I’m picking up some Jaden smith vibes from the first half. 9/10

    STOPWATCH has great production, and great lyrics, but I’ll be honest it would be a better song with more powerful delivery. I get the earl sweatshirt influence, but these lyrics aren’t having the same impact they should. If you notice how Earl stresses the cadence on certain words important to the rhyme scheme, you should try that, maybe mix it a tiny bit louder too. But overall I really enjoyed it. The singing at the end was great too, once again you’re really versatile. 8/10

    The last track with Pac at the beginning was a nice touch, and the production is great, as the lyrics. Here you sound a lot like XXXTentacion, not a bad thing but the song is a bit more generic than the other two in my opinion. 7/10

    Overall this is a great little release and my only advice is to find a way to not overuse the influence of these artists, while keeping the versatility that lets you channel many artists in your music. Working on finding your own sound more will definitely go a long way, but these myriad sounds don’t clash and do mix well together. Project as a whole is about an 8/10.

    You’re definitely talented and have what it takes to make it, just keep your head up and keep grinding!
     
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