Eminem - These Demons REMIX

Started by FiveOh1, Mar 5, 2021, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Mar 5, 2021
    So after my Clouds remix I posted on my Facebook asking my friends and followers what track I should remix next promising one a week for the month of March snd this one was requested and this is the result.
    Thanks for listening, love you, mean it.

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. 1999
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    Mar 5, 2021
    @Grim diss track
    :CHANCE:
     
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  3. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Mar 5, 2021
    no diss there.
     
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  4. 1999
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    Mar 5, 2021
    Sounded like it
    :policeok:
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

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    “Use to be so close with my friends
    Couldn’t believe they turned on me,
    Like Grim Did, Josh I thought we had like minds,
    But it’s alright, I’m fine, fine I’m lying, “
    Not meant to be a diss just a statement saying that I don’t like how s--- went.
     
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  6. Winter
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    Winter Super Comfy

    Mar 5, 2021
    You're rapping a little too fast for the beat here. Maybe your next remix should be over something slower.
     
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  7. RetiredAccount
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Mar 5, 2021
    you gon get hit with the clap back son. until you can keep a flow on a beat, keep the name out your mouttttth.
     
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    Mar 5, 2021
    :AK47:
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

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    I’ll keep that in mind but thought I did quite well staying on beat

    Don’t take so much offense to everything grimmy boy. I’m just here having a good time and if you think that’s even remotely a diss you might be taking things too serious
     
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  10. pHiLLip fARkLe
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    pHiLLip fARkLe @farkdoodle

    Mar 5, 2021
    What is your tape called so I have something to work with for the interlude you want me to do
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

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    It’s called CRASH. my plan was to have you cut in on a song at what would be 3/4 of the way through the song interrupting me rapping to say some classic Farkle s--- or something. I’ll send you the track in mind in a bit too.
     
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  12. OwI
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    OwI I was riding on a bike on a very late night

    Mar 5, 2021
    well that was .... pretty grimy
     
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    Michael Myers The Boogeyman Is Coming

    Mar 6, 2021
    Pretty nice. It could have been a little more on beat , especially at some parts. And maybe slow down a little bit. But I enjoyed it!
     
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    Ricky HIP-HOP CEO ™

    Mar 6, 2021
    Yo, my man, that was way better than Clouds remix. I f---s with it! Keep it up, the more tracks you'll drop the better it will get :uzi:
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

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    Always love the MM praise, but I’m gonna have to step back and reevaluate some stuff, like half my album lol cause I was sure this whole track was on point.
     
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    Michael Myers The Boogeyman Is Coming

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    Good for you man! As in, I hope our feedback can help you improve yourself even more.

    I enjoyed it, and I'm no expert or smt but as a listener I kept thinking this flow is pretty nice but if it was a little more riding the beat + slowing down a little, it would be even better.
     
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    LasiK RETIRED

    Mar 6, 2021
    flow off beat
     
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    Jay Zeus I am the god-favored weed strain

    Mar 6, 2021
    Yo' sister "Summer" fahn AF. She gon' get dis d-ck, sir.
     
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    Antman No Cap

    Mar 6, 2021
    I think you should rap on slower, less structured beats to compliment you better. You were really off beat, like completely due to the beats pacing and your natural speed
     
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    Chrollo プレイボーイ

    Mar 6, 2021
    Who does Jay mean by that?
    a) Summer Glau
    b) Summer Walker
    c) Summer, the actual season
     
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